I am going
to talk about of the my vacation in general I am working the major time, but
also travel, specific I am going to Pucon and environs, with my girlfriend we
were for ten days in this travel, in this days I live new experience, for
example we did rafting, this was very fun, in the beginning I am not convinced
of pay to agency tourism, but my girlfriend convinced me, the import is that a
very nice experience and I am grateful, the rafting is a sports of team and is
importan with the persons of the team, though in the start we had some drawbacks then they dispelled and
old result very well. The other activities developed in this vacation was going
to the hot spring, the interesant of this is that day It was cloudy and
drizzling, this was very amazing. In general my holidays was very diverse, but
very funny.
You didn't want pay to agency tourism, you are stingy xD. I would want do rafting, that sounds funny. See you next time
ResponderBorrarYou didn't want pay to agency tourism, you are stingy xD. I would want do rafting, that sounds funny. See you next time
ResponderBorrarHi Estee! that great activities dude! and what a diverse holidays man!
ResponderBorrarregards Estee c:
Ian:
ResponderBorrarWC 156. You were requested to write about 200. You really need to edit your text. It is hard to understand:
“I am going to talk (FUTURE) about of the my vacation in general I am working (PRESENT)the major time, but also travel (PRESENT), specific I am going to Pucon (FUTURE)and environs, with my girlfriend we were (PAST)for ten days in this travel, in this days I live (PRESENT)…”
Your sentences are incomplete and mixed up:
“the major time” MOST OF THE TIME…
“specific I am going to” SPECIFICALLY……
“in this days I live” IN THOSE DAYS I LIVED…
……for example we did rafting, this was (very) fun (PAST), (in) AT the beginning I am not convinced (PRESENT)
In general, your text is hard to follow, please, edit it before publishing.