The sexism and male chauvinism
The sexism is a problem in Chile, also in the rest of world,
this do not a local problem. althoug the society in this country is contructed
about male chauvinism, that is one form of discrimination against the all
women, this discrimination affects each spaces about this women.
The responsability of us is to change the form of think,
that make revile to women by , citing by Rosa Luxemburg "In a world where
we are all socially equal, humanly different and totally free”, is a dificult
wor, but we get making, fighting against the pulses, generated by society and
supported by the human race. The thinking expressed here, is born considering
that we have very naturalizad the sexism in to live the life, it is represent
in form of male chauvinism, not we realize of the actions that generated
violence (phisical and psychological) about the women.
The other topics related with sexism is the abuse against
homosexual, in my opinion exist a progress respect some years, in the delopment
of my life, i appreciated the difference in the treatment toward the
homosexsual, before is considered as a sin, something bad, very bad today is
normal, is a decision of the life, you do not something this affect in the rest
life.
In conclusion the great action is denature the male
chauvinism and sexism, obviously do you can not eliminated all, but little by
little generated change in this topics.
Ian,
ResponderBorrarWC:245. You needed to write 300. Please, make sure you stick to the instructions. Thanks for sharing your views, but you need to work A LOT in your text. Check the following:
…(The) sexism and male chauvinism…{WHEN YOU TALK ABOUT GENERAL THINGS, YOU DON’T USE “THE”}
…(The) sexism is a problem in Chile,
…this (do) IS not a local problem. althougH the society in this country is conStructed about male chauvinism
…discrimination against (the) all women, this discrimination affects each space(s ) about (this) THESE women.
…The responsI(a )bility of us is (OUR RESPONSIBILITY)
to change the (form) WAY of thinkING, that makeS revile to women by
…?is a diFficult world?, but we get making, fighting against the pulses, (UNCLEAR)
… we have [very] naturalizE(a) d (the) sexism in to live (the) OUR life, it is represented in THE form of male chauvinism,
…(phY(i)sical and psychological) about (the) women.
… is the abuse against homosexualS, in my opinion (exist a) THERE IS SOME progress( respect some) IN RECENT? years, in the deVElopment …
treatment towardS (the) homosexsualS, before IT WAS (is) considered as a sin,
…, you do not something this affect in the rest life (UNCLEAR).
Cheers,