My best
vacation was in Pichilemu three years ago, it was the first travel alone with my
girlfriend, it was a new experience for both of them before. I had traveler with
girlfriend family and also it was fun but no exist comparison about the other
travel because we need level of confidence more high for example we had to plan
the to cook for one week and distributing the cost, all this this are new for
us . I met Punta de Lobos it is a wonderful headland from south Pichilemu. We
saw sunset, there is amazing the colors of sky and people surfing they formed a
beautiful picture, the waves was enormous and we were surprise because the
surfing people do not have problems for dominates. We went to Pichilemu in March,
in this month there was not much holiday people accordingly the beach and streets
were very empty and it could enjoy more in opposite when have more people and
it is congested. For the reasons given above I say my best vacation I lived in
Pichilemu and lived very much new experiences whit my girlfirend
Pichilemu reminds me of our 'Geography of the Sea' class and the surf zone jaja!
ResponderBorrarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderBorrarMy last vacations with my father was there!!. Is a place very funny and nice. I think that you are very romantic and I like hear stories romantic jajaj. You and you girlfriend should try practice to surf. I tried and I was all day trying, is tiring but worth it :).
ResponderBorrarand...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y4O7ufx9D_s
Look this video!! is recorded in Pichilemu, and the singer is grat!!!
and the song is very grat too!! , try to translate from english to spanish.I belive that you will identify jejeje
ResponderBorrarMy best vacation was in Pichilemu three years ago, (TS)
ResponderBorrarit was the first travel alone with my girlfriend, it was a new experience for both of (them) US? before.(SS1)
I had travelleD[r] with MY girlfriend’S family and also it was fun but THERE IS no [exist] comparison about the other (travel) TRIP because we needed A HIGHER level of confidence (more high) for example we had to plan the to cookING for one week and distributing the cost, all this [this are] WAS new for us(EXAMPLE)
. I [met] KNEW Punta de Lobos it is a wonderful headland from south Pichilemu. (SS2)
We saw sunset, there is amazing the colors of sky and people surfing they formed a beautiful picture,(EXPLANATION)
the waves (was) WERE enormous and we were surpriseD because the surfing people do not have problems for dominatING[es] THEM. (EXPLANATION)
We went to Pichilemu in March, in this month there WERE NOT MANY (was not much) holiday MAKERS, (people) accordingly the beach and streets were very empty and it could enjoy more (in opposite when have more people and it is congested) (UNCLEAR EXPLANATION).
For the reasons given above I say my best vacation I lived in Pichilemu and lived [very much] MANY new experiences [whit] WITH my [girlfirend] GIRLFRIEND.(CONCLUDING SENTENCE)
Ian,
You need to do a much better edition work. You have too many grammar mistakes and some spelling mistakes that are simply not acceptable; (whit; girlfirend) The structure is not bad, you should balance SSs and explanations, that’s important.