I
do not like Santiago of Chile. Exist very much arguments of because Santiago is
bad, Firstly is a city segregates for the money, where the people that have
more money has really building new exclusives cities for live. In addition the
quality of live in Santiago for the poor people is especially bad for two
reasons, one the time of travel for to the work and two the time in the work
added this aspects the population poor or the middle class do not have time
of leisure or family time. Also the
pollution is an interesting aspect, the critics levels of contamination
environments, especially in winter for the little air circulation. In
conclusion, the city Santiago have all this and more arguments for say is bad
city and escape as soon as possiblemartes, 6 de diciembre de 2016
My opinion of Santiago of Chile
I
do not like Santiago of Chile. Exist very much arguments of because Santiago is
bad, Firstly is a city segregates for the money, where the people that have
more money has really building new exclusives cities for live. In addition the
quality of live in Santiago for the poor people is especially bad for two
reasons, one the time of travel for to the work and two the time in the work
added this aspects the population poor or the middle class do not have time
of leisure or family time. Also the
pollution is an interesting aspect, the critics levels of contamination
environments, especially in winter for the little air circulation. In
conclusion, the city Santiago have all this and more arguments for say is bad
city and escape as soon as possible
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I agree in a lot of reasons, we should talk about it
ResponderBorrarI should use "exist a lot" intead of "Exist very much arguments"
TS: I do not like Santiago of Chile.
ResponderBorrarSS1: [Exist very much] THERE ARE MANY arguments [of because] TO SAY Santiago is bad,
EXP:Firstly IT (NEVER OMIT THE SUBJECT]is a city segregateD[s] [for the] BY money, where the people that have more money [has really building new exclusives cities for live] [UNCLEAR].
SS2: In addition the quality of liFE[ve] in Santiago for the poor people is especially bad for two reasons, one the time of travel for/to [the] work and two the time in the work [??]
SS3: added [this] ONCE THESE aspects HAVE ADDED UP, the 2)population 1)poor or the middle class do not have time [of] FOR leisure or family time. EXPLANATION? EXAMPLE?
SS4: Also the pollution is an interesting aspect, the critic[s] levels of contamination OF THE environment[s], especially in winter for the little air circulation....YES? FINISH THE SENTENCE
C: In conclusion, the city Santiago [have] HAS? all [this and more arguments for say is] THERE ARE MANY ARGUMENTS TO SAY THE CITY OF SANTIAGO IS A bad city and YOU SHOULD escape as soon as possible
Ian, this text needs a lot of work, both in grammar and structure.